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lovedly
By lovedly, 24 October, 2014

AT TIMES IN SILENCE
LIES BLISS!
COMMENT
IF YOU WISH!

Simon Smythe

Simon Smythe

10 years 8 months ago

hmmm

I always walk into the trap . . . but I learn things

Ian.T

Ian.T

10 years 8 months ago

Loved

I know you rarely read long pieces but this is being extreme.
It was far too much for me to take in.
"At" I am here already.
"Times" The past when things happened outside of now
"In" This is where you will find me most days.
"Silence" shouted as if the echo didn't come back sad.
"Lies" A distortion of the truth to please someone. Or resting..
"Bliss" feelings thrown inward to disturb the Spirit.
"Comment" These words are the thing this is.
"If" That space you wished you had filled
"You" Loved in the guise of a Bard we see each day
"Wish" something you want and not need..

Still love you, Yours Ian.T