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mofeezies
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Styx
I stumbled over rocks trying to keep pace with the train, her pale hand slipping from mine.
Her nightgowned streamed towards me in the wind and her silver hair folded over us until it felt as though the world had vanished and only she remained.
"I can't go in there without a gift." she said.
Her eyes met mine. Cold and blue and cold as ice as a winter storm swept over my chest.
Her beauty like the moon consumed me like a heavenly eclipse.
A helpless sob choked at the back of my throat as her hand slipped away even further.
I squeezed her hand,
and held on for life
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- June 2026
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"I feel a real loss here, not so much for the one holding on, but for the other one, the one maybe already being lost. Having said that, this has a weird death-dream pull to it. The train feels like the ferry, and “I can…" -
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I like philosophy, math, evangelical themes, and the things that tie them together! I hope you enjoy my poetry as a beginner!
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