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Oct 22, 2012
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eche><lone
satire clone
I hear sighs
ringing
down the wires
dripping like raindrops
the pearls of
words
in a world
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
12 years 9 months ago
Steve
eche><lone, not a clue as to its meaning, though your words, make out that you are hearing the harmonics of a talk with someone, and what they say in the sigh, behind the actual words that are pouring out.????
Yours Ian.T
Ross Hamilton Hill
12 years 8 months ago
not bad but too brief to earn
not bad but too brief to earn much attention
Esker
12 years 8 months ago
and so it is so Ross Hamilton Hill
Like that sound one never finds out what..that wakes us from a dream
a dog stirred...and then to slumber again..
Its actually about Eschelon....a systems thing...electronic watching..
thank you