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Oct 22, 2012
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eche><lone
satire clone
I hear sighs
ringing
down the wires
dripping like raindrops
the pearls of
words
in a world
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
13 years ago
Steve
eche><lone, not a clue as to its meaning, though your words, make out that you are hearing the harmonics of a talk with someone, and what they say in the sigh, behind the actual words that are pouring out.????
Yours Ian.T
Ross Hamilton Hill
12 years 12 months ago
not bad but too brief to earn
not bad but too brief to earn much attention
Esker
12 years 12 months ago
and so it is so Ross Hamilton Hill
Like that sound one never finds out what..that wakes us from a dream
a dog stirred...and then to slumber again..
Its actually about Eschelon....a systems thing...electronic watching..
thank you