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Jan 07, 2013
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WHAT YOU HAVE GIVEN ME
I -
Insouciant
ingracious
indifferently
benign
You -
courageous,
flagrantly outspoken -
have opened
my mind
Nestling joy
suckles at this breast
Awakened longing
from what was
an insensate mess
A ratchet to my desires
has been wrenched at the wheel
I am alive again
I breath
I feel
7-01-13
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Seren
12 years 8 months ago
Exquisite ... I can't see
Exquisite ... I can't see anything I would change
Nice work Boni
Love Jc xxx
Bonitaj
12 years 8 months ago
Thanks JC
Great to hear back from you!
Stay well.
loved
11 years 11 months ago
Such beautiful words
left unread
the dictionary one would have to refer
that's why
I compose simple in words
a kid can't dispose