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Jan 07, 2013
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WHAT YOU HAVE GIVEN ME
I -
Insouciant
ingracious
indifferently
benign
You -
courageous,
flagrantly outspoken -
have opened
my mind
Nestling joy
suckles at this breast
Awakened longing
from what was
an insensate mess
A ratchet to my desires
has been wrenched at the wheel
I am alive again
I breath
I feel
7-01-13
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Seren
12 years 5 months ago
Exquisite ... I can't see
Exquisite ... I can't see anything I would change
Nice work Boni
Love Jc xxx
Bonitaj
12 years 5 months ago
Thanks JC
Great to hear back from you!
Stay well.
loved
11 years 8 months ago
Such beautiful words
left unread
the dictionary one would have to refer
that's why
I compose simple in words
a kid can't dispose