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Ian.T
12 years 1 month ago
Rula
A space in time, this sounds as if there was a rent in time and the writer fell through only to regain their way again.
I liked it, but would have liked just a few more words(not many) to stitch the tear..
Still liked it a lot, Yours Ian.T
Rula
12 years 1 month ago
Ian
You've captured the sense well as usual except that I'm trying to be back for writing as many things drift me away.I just feel like a log into rough waves.
Thanks for your kind visit.
Ian.T
12 years 1 month ago
Rula
Just write those things down and they will become a new direction, I think that you are changing your ways of writing, this is where things become blurred, but not for long..
Take care young Lady, Yours Ian.T
Rula
12 years 1 month ago
dear Ian
I believe you're right. I am not worried. I'm enjoying my time these days just reading and commenting on others'.
Thank you again.
Esker
12 years 1 month ago
eight lines
found the workings of the poem well..
good word choices and connect
from beginning to end...
Thank You!