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To be happy.

Yes, really happy,
Gratuitous, unearned happiness
Yes I am happy.

It shakes me to my core
Perhaps frisson or tremble is a better word

It is rare
It is precious
I am delighted

And…
Above all
Perhaps the perfect thing,

I don’t fear its inevitable ending.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Sydney, Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: The Romantics, The Mersey Sound, The Beats and, of course, The Bard

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Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 9 months ago

Jess ,

A simple piece that carries a mood that I hope is infectious,
It is great to be happy, we shall not worry about it's inevitable end we will enjoy it while it is here,
Yours as always Ian.T

weirdelf

weirdelf

11 years 9 months ago

not all my infections are safe

but as far as I know happiness doesn't spread herpes or aids yet. No doubt the Chemical Warfare branch of the Catholic church is working on it.

loved

loved

11 years 9 months ago

I observe a marked

sense of improved humor
I thought you only used
a guillotine
to practice on my neck

but happiness can be contagious
if it makes any difference

Ian.T

Ian.T

11 years 9 months ago

Jess

That Lonnie what is he on about Tail is that a typo or what????
Oxtail soup now there's a nice piece of tail, I wish he wouldn't talk in riddles there are enough vague poetic statements here as it is.
I was thinking about age things this morning like kisses, memory and many other things that become vague, I hope someone would let me know what happened to all those simply nice things I have a vague recollection of, even smiling LOL.
Take care Yours as always Ian.T

weirdelf

weirdelf

11 years 9 months ago

thanks

though I presume you read the last line.

Rula

Rula

11 years 9 months ago

an uplifting poem jess

Good for you.
I'd re-arrange the first three lines with a few changes for a more logical consistancy.

Yes, I am happy.
 Really happy!
( A)Gratuitous, unearned happiness
..............I liked the word "gratuitious"


You make me feel happy too  

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weirdelf

weirdelf

11 years 9 months ago

clearer

thanks.

Something interesting. Do you realise there was more a political/ideological content in that suggestion than a poetical one?

Rula

Rula

11 years 9 months ago

To be quite honest

I only cared for the logical consistancy when I suggested the re-arrangement of those lines

You might like to tell me how!

L

Lonnie

11 years 9 months ago

Well done

Glad to see the mood change, and I hope it brings you more peace of mind!

L

Lonnie

11 years 9 months ago

Uh-huh

You mean as opposed to a piece of tail? LOL!!

K

Kailashana2

11 years 9 months ago

Indeed.

Indeed.

Joy is infectious. I am delirious.

~

weirdelf

weirdelf

11 years 9 months ago

hahah!

As an intrinsic atheist as I am I knew we had a connection.

Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

11 years 9 months ago

Jess,

Interesting to see you have a mild emotional side, I am interested to see more writing of this nature from you.
"The cat is out of the bag!"

Eddie