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Mar 17, 2015
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Collective Karma
.
this seminary of relativities
defines
rights and wrongs
miracles and abominations
awe and antipathy
love and loathing
perpetuates the corporeal world of
sensibility
vitality and subsistence
calibrates
the unfavourable and auspicious
evil and virtue
weak and strong
unhealthy and sound
so if come
malakim
messiahs
bodhi....
then needs be
lucifers
mephistopheles
ignorance....
to harmonise
counterbalance
keep the dream
in redeeming equilibrium
.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
10 years 4 months ago
Judyanne
Pheeeew! went top over my head ....since i know not much about these spiritual vibes...
Regards,
judyanne
10 years 3 months ago
lol Raj
not spiritual - just saying that here in this particular universe, relativity is the key - therefore, if there is good, there is need of evil in equal part - to keep the balance
thanks for the read and comment
love judy
xxx
Geremia
10 years 4 months ago
You got it right, Sounds a
You got it right, Sounds a bit Manichean. The world is a struggle between opposites. There is universal GOOD and EVIL. There is a constant dialectic between the two, but no synthesis in tis struggle is possible,
joe
judyanne
10 years 3 months ago
thanks Joe
for the read and comment
love judy
xxx
Sparrow
10 years 4 months ago
Judy
Yes !!!!!!!
Yours if only I could remember who I am after reading all those words, Ian xx
judyanne
10 years 3 months ago
lol
thanks ian
xxx
scribbler
10 years 4 months ago
Satan
and Jesus, good and evil, republicans and democrats ! Ying and yang and some other thang lol. All for balance......stan
judyanne
10 years 3 months ago
stan and judy
lol
xxx