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Collective Karma

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this seminary of relativities

defines
rights and wrongs
miracles and abominations
awe and antipathy
love and loathing

perpetuates the corporeal world of
sensibility
vitality and subsistence

calibrates
the unfavourable and auspicious
evil and virtue
weak and strong
unhealthy and sound

so if come
malakim
messiahs
bodhi....

then needs be
lucifers
mephistopheles
ignorance....

to harmonise
counterbalance
keep the dream
in redeeming equilibrium

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About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Western Australia, AUS

Favorite Poets: Favourite poets? So many, so varied. I like particular songs, not necessarily the singer... and the same goes for poetry. I can honestly say though, that Alfred Noyes' The Highwayman was what inspired my love of poetry - my mother began reading it to me when I was still a baby, and it became my favourite bedtime story

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raj

10 years 4 months ago

Judyanne

Pheeeew! went top over my head ....since i know not much about these spiritual vibes...

Regards,

judyanne

judyanne

10 years 3 months ago

lol Raj

not spiritual - just saying that here in this particular universe, relativity is the key - therefore, if there is good, there is need of evil in equal part - to keep the balance
thanks for the read and comment
love judy
xxx

Geremia

Geremia

10 years 4 months ago

You got it right, Sounds a

You got it right, Sounds a bit Manichean. The world is a struggle between opposites. There is universal GOOD and EVIL. There is a constant dialectic between the two, but no synthesis in tis struggle is possible,

joe

Sparrow

Sparrow

10 years 4 months ago

Judy

Yes !!!!!!!
Yours if only I could remember who I am after reading all those words, Ian xx

S

scribbler

10 years 4 months ago

Satan

and Jesus, good and evil, republicans and democrats ! Ying and yang and some other thang lol. All for balance......stan