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Geremia
Geremia
Nov 19, 2015 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

WHIRLING DERVISH edit

Whirling Dervish

There are hearts that never feel
and souls as cold as steel
who like Whirling Dervishes
dance to disconnect --
Creators of blissful trances
and release into madness.

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Country/Region: USA

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lovedly

lovedly

9 years 10 months ago

UR SUPERB ...WHERE EVER WE GO

All over Neopoet
its JOE and only Joe

here we all go
metaphorical lovely show
let me know
So that one day I to may
also glow
dear friendly poet
my Joe

Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years 10 months ago

Joe

A resurgence of thoughts arranged with perfection, keep writing our Friend, Yours Ian..