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Geremia
Geremia
Nov 19, 2015 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

WHIRLING DERVISH edit

Whirling Dervish

There are hearts that never feel
and souls as cold as steel
who like Whirling Dervishes
dance to disconnect --
Creators of blissful trances
and release into madness.

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Country/Region: USA

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lovedly

lovedly

9 years 7 months ago

UR SUPERB ...WHERE EVER WE GO

All over Neopoet
its JOE and only Joe

here we all go
metaphorical lovely show
let me know
So that one day I to may
also glow
dear friendly poet
my Joe

Sparrow

Sparrow

9 years 7 months ago

Joe

A resurgence of thoughts arranged with perfection, keep writing our Friend, Yours Ian..