Sorry

I was an obnoxious bitch,
a malignant witch,
to ever treat you so.

Dearest friend,
I'm with you till the end,
our relationship rules,

Forgive and forget,
please don't poor scorn on,
my regret.

A pal and a mate,
our interaction is so great.
Please don't hate me.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: To someone very dear to me, sorry if I was rude. Lou xx

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

Comments

judyanne

14 years 8 months ago

what a lovely way to apoligise lou

i'm sure no-one could resist forgiving you for what ever you have done/said....
one little thing:
'Dearest friend I'm with you till then end' (did you mean 'the end'?)

i love the 'obnoxious bitch malignant witch' bit

love judy
xxxx

lou

14 years 8 months ago

Thanks Jude

Let's hope they do forgive me

Love Lou xx

lou

14 years 8 months ago

Jc

Lets hope your right .

Much love Lou xx

lou

14 years 8 months ago

Oh shirl

You made me cry.

Much love Lou

Xxxx

lou

14 years 8 months ago

hi

I toned it down a little, it got a little too flowery.

thanks for the nice comments.

Lou

magics02

14 years 8 months ago

I so missed you also here and your asking for a forgiveness and I have pardoned you. LMAO just kidding honey. Don't be so hard on yourself, we all make mistakes and yes I agree with all the others you are one sweet woman here and do not forget it. I hope you are doing fine and I will be on more in the upcoming weeks. I missed you alot dear friend.

Love and Hugs
Mona
xoxoxo