Sorry

I was an obnoxious bitch,
a malignant witch,
to ever treat you so.

Dearest friend,
I'm with you till the end,
our relationship rules,

Forgive and forget,
please don't poor scorn on,
my regret.

A pal and a mate,
our interaction is so great.
Please don't hate me.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: To someone very dear to me, sorry if I was rude. Lou xx

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

About the Author

Region, Country: West London, GBR

Favorite Poets: Pablo Neruda , Jack Kerouac, Alan Ginsberg, D.H Lawrence, Jim Morrison's lyrics,

Comments

judyanne

14 years 11 months ago

what a lovely way to apoligise lou

i'm sure no-one could resist forgiving you for what ever you have done/said....
one little thing:
'Dearest friend I'm with you till then end' (did you mean 'the end'?)

i love the 'obnoxious bitch malignant witch' bit

love judy
xxxx

lou

14 years 11 months ago

Thanks Jude

Let's hope they do forgive me

Love Lou xx

lou

14 years 11 months ago

Jc

Lets hope your right .

Much love Lou xx

lou

14 years 11 months ago

Oh shirl

You made me cry.

Much love Lou

Xxxx

lou

14 years 11 months ago

hi

I toned it down a little, it got a little too flowery.

thanks for the nice comments.

Lou

magics02

14 years 11 months ago

I so missed you also here and your asking for a forgiveness and I have pardoned you. LMAO just kidding honey. Don't be so hard on yourself, we all make mistakes and yes I agree with all the others you are one sweet woman here and do not forget it. I hope you are doing fine and I will be on more in the upcoming weeks. I missed you alot dear friend.

Love and Hugs
Mona
xoxoxo