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Jan 27, 2011
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Love Is Music
Love Is Music
Love shouldn’t be shown
But seen
Everyone who’s in love
Knows what it means
The silence
The simplicity
Warmth of a palm,
A quiet caress,
A sweet smile
Upon the harp
of a loving heart
Can place a song
Worth a million
Incomparable...
As the sweetest sounds are heard
In reverberation
Does it appear?
Like the loveliest tune
Abide With Me!
How wondrous
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
13 years 6 months ago
I found this on the undiscovered list
and I know why it was there. No-one else had the courage to tell you it is trite and cliched.
Loved, you do come up with original gems. This isn't one of them.
loved
13 years 6 months ago
I accept ...
Gems are rare
And
From my embalmed mind
One in a million
I guess.
I do accept....
That you will someday,
Teach me the magnificent art
And mould my heart,
Twill be a part of thy creativity Jess,
You now know,
How I play my part.