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Jan 27, 2011
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Love Is Music
Love Is Music
Love shouldn’t be shown
But seen
Everyone who’s in love
Knows what it means
The silence
The simplicity
Warmth of a palm,
A quiet caress,
A sweet smile
Upon the harp
of a loving heart
Can place a song
Worth a million
Incomparable...
As the sweetest sounds are heard
In reverberation
Does it appear?
Like the loveliest tune
Abide With Me!
How wondrous
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
13 years 10 months ago
I found this on the undiscovered list
and I know why it was there. No-one else had the courage to tell you it is trite and cliched.
Loved, you do come up with original gems. This isn't one of them.
loved
13 years 10 months ago
I accept ...
Gems are rare
And
From my embalmed mind
One in a million
I guess.
I do accept....
That you will someday,
Teach me the magnificent art
And mould my heart,
Twill be a part of thy creativity Jess,
You now know,
How I play my part.