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Oct 14, 2016
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For some with a linear mindset
Always a constant pressing fear
Their aging an inexorable onset
Older with every passing year.
Believers in nature's cyclical state
Realize age is but another facet
Releasing cares to ultimate fate
Graceful maturity is an asset.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Guy Jenkins
8 years 9 months ago
a bit like Gilgamesh's
a bit like Gilgamesh's thoughts
cool
Guy
OriginalRhyku
8 years 9 months ago
Guy
Gilgamesh or Upanishads or Zen Buddhism or Confucius' philosophy. An Eastern concept of a cyclical existence like the Wheels of Dharma / Karma. Thanks for your review.