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OriginalRhyku

Oct 14, 2016 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Age Gauge:

For some with a linear mindset
Always a constant pressing fear
Their aging an inexorable onset
Older with every passing year.

Believers in nature's cyclical state
Realize age is but another facet
Releasing cares to ultimate fate
Graceful maturity is an asset.

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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

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Country/Region: Asia India

Favorite Poets: Rabindranath Tagore, Shakespeare among many more

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8 years 9 months ago

a bit like Gilgamesh's

a bit like Gilgamesh's thoughts
cool
Guy

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8 years 9 months ago

Guy

Gilgamesh or Upanishads or Zen Buddhism or Confucius' philosophy. An Eastern concept of a cyclical existence like the Wheels of Dharma / Karma. Thanks for your review.