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Rula
Rula
Jun 27, 2017 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
This poem is part of the workshop:

IMAGERY IN POETRY( ready to start?)

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The Gemstone ( Imagery WS... Ex. 2)

Life struggles polished her,
a gemstone.

— Rula, Jun 27, 2017

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Critiques

Race_9togo

Race_9togo

8 years 11 months ago

Hi Rula,

Such intensity packed into so few words.
Beautiful strong imagery.

S

scribbler

8 years 11 months ago

Hi Rula

In my mind the struggles could range from water's wear to the intense heat and pressure which first formed the gem

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