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Jun 27, 2017
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The Gemstone ( Imagery WS... Ex. 2)
Life struggles polished her,
a gemstone.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
wesley snow
8 years ago
Almost suggestive of a river stone.
"Life struggles" not man.
Race_9togo
8 years ago
Hi Rula,
Such intensity packed into so few words.
Beautiful strong imagery.
scribbler
8 years ago
Hi Rula
In my mind the struggles could range from water's wear to the intense heat and pressure which first formed the gem