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Feb 12, 2018
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This poem is part of the workshop:
Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form
SunKu 1 Workshop
Fighting
To be me
Ain’t that easy
People’s
Opinions
Got it twisted
Shaming
Lost it’s punch
Went straight pass me.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
IRiz
7 years 4 months ago
the composition, the
the composition, the rhythmical flow, the alliteration you have it all
plus i relate to the content very much
Barbara Writes
7 years 4 months ago
That you much
A very fun workshop
raj
7 years 4 months ago
So good to read this. Short
So good to read this. Short form being your forte no wonder you picked up the threads of Sunku so quickly. Looking forward to red more.
I think opinion is 4 syllabi..i may be wrong..
Regards...
Barbara Writes
7 years 4 months ago
Thanks raj
Glad you like it. I’ll be writing more as my 24 hour is up lol
I think o·pin·ions is three tho.
IRiz
7 years 4 months ago
I agree about the count. Also
I agree about the count. Also I feel that the precise count is not always possible and not always important.
raj
7 years 4 months ago
I had mentioned that I could
I had mentioned that I could be wrong in the syllable count and now stand corrected...
Regards...