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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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SunKu 1 Workshop

Fighting
To be me
Ain’t that easy

People’s
Opinions
Got it twisted

Shaming
Lost it’s punch
Went straight pass me.

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

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IRiz

IRiz

7 years 4 months ago

the composition, the

the composition, the rhythmical flow, the alliteration you have it all
plus i relate to the content very much

R

raj

7 years 4 months ago

So good to read this. Short

So good to read this. Short form being your forte no wonder you picked up the threads of Sunku so quickly. Looking forward to red more.

I think opinion is 4 syllabi..i may be wrong..

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Barbara Writes

Barbara Writes

7 years 4 months ago

Thanks raj

Glad you like it. I’ll be writing more as my 24 hour is up lol
I think o·pin·ions is three tho.

IRiz

IRiz

7 years 4 months ago

I agree about the count. Also

I agree about the count. Also I feel that the precise count is not always possible and not always important.

R

raj

7 years 4 months ago

I had mentioned that I could

I had mentioned that I could be wrong in the syllable count and now stand corrected...

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