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Sunku: beyond rhyme and rhythm, search for new structures in short form

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Sunku 7

Little vile
Inevitable fate
Tastes so sweet

Skull bones
Switch blade
Feels so right

Familiar taste
Venomous snake
Never again

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe, Jim Morrison, Rudyard Kipling, Hermann Hesse, Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, Jack London, Stephen King, there are many more....

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Geezer

Geezer

7 years 4 months ago

I really like...

what you have written. I like the vehemence, the vicious vein of lines. Makes Killer want to stalk the streets again.

lonlyhrtsclub13

lonlyhrtsclub13

7 years 4 months ago

a woman scorned

Is never a good thing. But that familiar taste of poison always seems to be lurking. Perhaps killer needs to visit

weirdelf

weirdelf

7 years 4 months ago

Not a Sunku,

rhe subku is defined b'it threed stanzas and in exh kine,