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Aug 13, 2018 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Rescue Me

Oh heart, rescue me.
Let your beat
Be the rhythm of life.

And when I speak,
Let not cold currents,
deceit, reign supreme.

But let me remember
There is something more
Than left, right, middle.

Something more beautiful
Than what I might scheme,
Or plan

Oh heart please
give me your warmth
Return it onto my life

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: The Nederlands

Favorite Poets: William Butler Yates, Wallace Stevens, Giuseppe ungaretti, William Blake

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raj

7 years 8 months ago

Hi Tyro

this poem is unique because every stanza is almost a stand alone poem and they are so nicely interwoven with poise and elegance ...pretty exquisite stuff...a pleasure read is this heartcall...
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tyro

7 years 8 months ago

Hi raj

thank you, it is a reaction to the physical/mechanical trend of the west.

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raj

7 years 8 months ago

Thanks Tyro

for helping me read the subtext...by physical/mechanical do you mean material lacking a spiritual touch?
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Rula

7 years 8 months ago

Hello dear tyro

an adorable call/prayer. I thought this is all that we need when our hearts go phlegmatic in this life .
If only we can do a reset and have a new start
Thank you for sharing this halcyon prayer.