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Aug 13, 2018
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Rescue Me
Oh heart, rescue me.
Let your beat
Be the rhythm of life.
And when I speak,
Let not cold currents,
deceit, reign supreme.
But let me remember
There is something more
Than left, right, middle.
Something more beautiful
Than what I might scheme,
Or plan
Oh heart please
give me your warmth
Return it onto my life
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
6 years 11 months ago
Hi Tyro
this poem is unique because every stanza is almost a stand alone poem and they are so nicely interwoven with poise and elegance ...pretty exquisite stuff...a pleasure read is this heartcall...
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tyro
6 years 11 months ago
Hi raj
thank you, it is a reaction to the physical/mechanical trend of the west.
raj
6 years 11 months ago
Thanks Tyro
for helping me read the subtext...by physical/mechanical do you mean material lacking a spiritual touch?
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Rula
6 years 11 months ago
Hello dear tyro
an adorable call/prayer. I thought this is all that we need when our hearts go phlegmatic in this life .
If only we can do a reset and have a new start
Thank you for sharing this halcyon prayer.
tyro
6 years 11 months ago
thank you dear Rula
may your heart always be pure.
IRiz
6 years 8 months ago
It is a great poem, that
It is a great poem, that sounds like a prayer.