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F E M A L E: Mannuz [Runic Symbols]

When Adam sought a companion, God gifted him a Female

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Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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raj

6 years 11 months ago

Hi Rula

Nice one this relating to the legendary first female on this earth...

to make it shorter how about "sought" instead of "asked for"? ...
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