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Aug 14, 2018
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F E M A L E: Mannuz [Runic Symbols]
When Adam sought a companion, God gifted him a Female
— Rula, Aug 14, 2018
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
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raj
7 years 10 months ago
Hi Rula
Nice one this relating to the legendary first female on this earth...
to make it shorter how about "sought" instead of "asked for"? ...
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Rula
7 years 10 months ago
Thank you raj
Yep! I like sought better. More powerful!
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