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Aug 14, 2018
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F E M A L E: Mannuz [Runic Symbols]
When Adam sought a companion, God gifted him a Female
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
7 years 2 months ago
Hi Rula
Nice one this relating to the legendary first female on this earth...
to make it shorter how about "sought" instead of "asked for"? ...
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Rula
7 years 2 months ago
Thank you raj
Yep! I like sought better. More powerful!