W E A L T H: Fehu [Runic Symbols]

When W e a l t h equals ethics, it lasts endlessly when everything else's lost.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Comments

raj

7 years 2 months ago

Rula

your perception of wealth is pretty strong...I will look forward to how it evolves when you do the edits...i will keep following this...in the mean time I guess you need to correct the spello in the title...
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Rula

7 years 2 months ago

Thank you raj

for the correction.
Where else do you think I need to rework?

raj

7 years 2 months ago

I have a gut feeling that

I have a gut feeling that there could be more variations.....let me sleep over this and may be I will come up with a few suggestions for your perusal
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raj

7 years 2 months ago

Just realized

that these one liners can become good signature lines...don't they?
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Rula

7 years 2 months ago

There are

absolutely different versions. Does this mean this isn't a good one? And yep for the signature suggestion !

raj

7 years 2 months ago

i did say that your

i did say that your perception of wealth is pretty strong...didn't I? so get that that thought outta your mind that this is not good enough...ok?
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raj

7 years 2 months ago

Hi Rula

don't know if this is a good version

When w e a l t h is built on code of ethics, it's hard to end up a pauper
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Rula

7 years 2 months ago