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My Elysian Song

I like when we live in a halcyon space,
where but understanding is persistence,
where loving hearts are what we all embrace,
then no evil powers are in existence.

I like when we don't pass the hatred speech,
then only caring messages prevail,
when the unreachable hearts can be reached,
and through solace seas soul_boats have to sail.

So, the peace buds burgeon, and are a bloom.
while hate in cradle dies, with its cousin, gloom.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Inspired by Raj's I_You_We_Us Hope I'm giving it its justice.

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and , Poets are humanity when the world lose it.

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Sparrow

Sparrow

6 years 11 months ago

Rula

A lovely write short and exact, very meaningful I wish more would read and understand about Love and hate.
Yours as always.
Ian xx

Rula

Rula

6 years 11 months ago

Amen to that

dear Ian.
Thank you for the kind visit and the words of buttress.
Highly appreciated.

R

raj

6 years 11 months ago

Hi friend Rula

a nice poem with a great comparison between love and hate and how to deal with it.... some great lines too

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Rula

Rula

6 years 11 months ago

Thanks dear raj

Always a pleasure to have your lovely visit.
I'm happy to know that you liked it.