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Aug 20, 2018
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My Elysian Song
I like when we live in a halcyon space,
where but understanding is persistence,
where loving hearts are what we all embrace,
then no evil powers are in existence.
I like when we don't pass the hatred speech,
then only caring messages prevail,
when the unreachable hearts can be reached,
and through solace seas soul_boats have to sail.
So, the peace buds burgeon, and are a bloom.
while hate in cradle dies, with its cousin, gloom.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Inspired by Raj's I_You_We_Us Hope I'm giving it its justice.
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Sparrow
6 years 11 months ago
Rula
A lovely write short and exact, very meaningful I wish more would read and understand about Love and hate.
Yours as always.
Ian xx
Rula
6 years 11 months ago
Amen to that
dear Ian.
Thank you for the kind visit and the words of buttress.
Highly appreciated.
raj
6 years 11 months ago
Hi friend Rula
a nice poem with a great comparison between love and hate and how to deal with it.... some great lines too
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Rula
6 years 11 months ago
Thanks dear raj
Always a pleasure to have your lovely visit.
I'm happy to know that you liked it.