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November contest

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PRIMAL STALK (November contest)

The hunt begins
for hunger gnaws
while the mainspring slowly spins
and the stalker gives no pause.

Sun sinks slowly in the west,
fellow carnivores join in the fray
each hoping they can pass the test
of filling belly at the end of day.

Many targets are passed by
in the quest for the right one.
This hunter is choosy, sly.
His prey when found will soon be done.

And there it is, just off the path,
no idea what is to come.
Quick turn, predetermined aftermath.
The quarry already beyond numb.
I, the hunter, magically
turn into a KFC.

*KFC is a fast food chicken restaurant chain

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

6 years 7 months ago

Yes,

Yes you had me hooked, waiting for a gory ending. Better to end this way LOL. Regards Roscoe..

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scribbler

6 years 7 months ago

Hi Roscoe

Glad you liked the twist at the end lol......stan

R

raj

6 years 7 months ago

good one Stan but had

good one Stan but had expected more fun than the end line...
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scribbler

6 years 7 months ago

Greetings raj

For some reason I just couldn't come up with anything worthy of an out loud laugh so I settled on maybe getting folks to smile

S

scribbler

6 years 7 months ago

Hi Lowell

Yeah it's not laugh out loud funny but maybe at least smile worthy which is all that's required of the contest. Appreciate your honesty and ideas

S

scribbler

6 years 7 months ago

Not to worry

When it comes to contest I can only post for fun because I'm a bit ineligible to win lol. BTW I'm about to start up an implied imagery shop if you'd like to join in.

S

scribbler

4 years 6 months ago

Hi Barb

All the poor chickens lol. Good to see you dropped in

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scribbler

4 years 6 months ago

Hi Barb

We each have our own choice for diet.........or perhaps you are finally admitting you came from the star Vega lol

Gracy

Gracy

4 years 6 months ago

Hi Stan, I'm enjoying this

Hi Stan, I'm enjoying this one immensely. The end rhymes and spacing are all perfect. You did make me smile with your ending, I also thought it would be gory...lol.
We have no KFC in Argentina, but reading the comments I now understand. No nits at all, Gracy

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scribbler

4 years 6 months ago

Hi Grace

I appreciate you dropping by on this oldie written by an oldie lol