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Jan 11, 2020
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Solarly Creator
If any
is
Sun
it ignites and flames
and does every one
burn
then
finally
churn
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Dandini
4 years 5 months ago
I can understand why this has
I can understand why this has been ignored for over a year.
lovedly
4 years 5 months ago
and why
what is ur understadning
Dandini
4 years 5 months ago
To be frank, it's not very
To be frank, it's not very good.
lovedly
4 years 5 months ago
thanks
you are frank
man
but u must say why show ur ability to critique anyone can just form an opinion just one
Dandini
4 years 5 months ago
Sorry I don't understand your
Sorry I don't understand your sentence.