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Solarly Creator

If any
is
Sun

it ignites and flames
and does every one
burn
then
finally
churn

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

lovedly

lovedly

4 years 5 months ago

thanks

you are frank
man
but u must say why show ur ability to critique anyone can just form an opinion just one