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Sep 21, 2020
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PARADISE WHERE
I've never ever thought
of another
PARADISE
but this Earth
so many teach me
how I still live
in a FOOL'S
Paradise
when all others believe in one
Geez has given me up as a
foolish one
hope to hear from you all
throw your dice will you
I shall then feel the pulse of your
PARADISE
as I am preparing to fly
the rainbow you say
I can't now see
SANS Shakespeare
perhaps
now he's calling me
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Tell me how FOOLISH I AM Grade me out of 100
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Lavender
4 years 10 months ago
Paradise Where
Hi, Lovedly,
What's that quote? "Paradise is not a place, it's a state of mind."
Thank you!
L
lovedly
4 years 10 months ago
HA HA HA
I G N O R A n C E
alone is Blissssssssssssssssss
tthanks