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PARADISE WHERE

I've never ever thought
of another
PARADISE
but this Earth
so many teach me
how I still live
in a FOOL'S
Paradise
when all others believe in one
Geez has given me up as a
foolish one

hope to hear from you all
throw your dice will you
I shall then feel the pulse of your
PARADISE

as I am preparing to fly
the rainbow you say
I can't now see
SANS Shakespeare
perhaps
now he's calling me

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Tell me how FOOLISH I AM Grade me out of 100

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Lavender

Lavender

4 years 10 months ago

Paradise Where

Hi, Lovedly,
What's that quote? "Paradise is not a place, it's a state of mind."
Thank you!
L

lovedly

lovedly

4 years 10 months ago

HA HA HA

I G N O R A n C E

alone is Blissssssssssssssssss
tthanks