CREDIT TO MA'AM GRACY

Your advent is like cement
to my mind
to think and imagination combine
we shall dine in the wind
and sing
as you say

''There is a time to love
and
a time to die''

I have loved all along
now I feel it's time to say
good bye

but no one knows
not even I
when to say good bye
even if I try
don't know why

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Whenever I am in low spirits and can't drink even wine I my self remind to me who is kind Then I rewind No it's not yet time I am young only plus 81

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

Comments

lovedly

4 years 4 months ago

15

for Gracy
not gravy pl lol

lovedly

4 years 4 months ago

fifteen

I do my honest duty
rely not on Smarty
lol 15

Lavender

4 years 4 months ago

Credit to Ma'am Gracy

Hi, Loveldy,
"...we shall dine in the wind and sing." Sweet poetry for certain!
Thank you!
L

lovedly

4 years 4 months ago

LAVE

You raise the crescendo
lovedly bows pleasantly