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Feb 23, 2021
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CREDIT TO MA'AM GRACY
Your advent is like cement
to my mind
to think and imagination combine
we shall dine in the wind
and sing
as you say
''There is a time to love
and
a time to die''
I have loved all along
now I feel it's time to say
good bye
but no one knows
not even I
when to say good bye
even if I try
don't know why
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Whenever I am in low spirits and can't drink even wine I my self remind to me who is kind Then I rewind No it's not yet time I am young only plus 81
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lovedly
4 years 4 months ago
15
for Gracy
not gravy pl lol
lovedly
4 years 4 months ago
fifteen
I do my honest duty
rely not on Smarty
lol 15
Lavender
4 years 4 months ago
Credit to Ma'am Gracy
Hi, Loveldy,
"...we shall dine in the wind and sing." Sweet poetry for certain!
Thank you!
L
lovedly
4 years 4 months ago
LAVE
You raise the crescendo
lovedly bows pleasantly