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Aug 16, 2022
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O O O O O OO000000 give me a Kiss ...eh many did u will
O O O give me a kiss eh
hahaahahaa
you said it friend
give me a kiss eh
never give in
when loss is assured
you may still win
I always advise my kids/and grand
''NO'' IS IN YOUR POCKET
BUT DO ASK
IT MAY BECOME A ''YES''
ELSE HOW WILL IT EVER
IF YOU REMAIN silent quick silver
They smile and say
give a 100 dollars
right away
I can only afford ten
they take it are happy
and run away
then return
Kiss me on my nose
for free ...smilingly
About This Poem
Last Few Words: JUST A SWEET MESSAGE TO MANY BE NOT NEGATIVE
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geezer
2 years 11 months ago
Such a great...
feeling having grandchildren, hey? I'll bet that you are a hell of a grand poppy!
~ Geez.
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lovedly
2 years 11 months ago
THANKS Gee
they four are very very beautiful in looks and heart
they love me so much
my children wonder how and why
I give them LOVE and flying kisses
even in my dreams
and as in pain if ever I do scream
They are my souls
keep me alive
for their love only
I shall forever stay alive
BLESS ALL WILL YE