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O O O O O OO000000 give me a Kiss ...eh many did u will

O O O give me a kiss eh

hahaahahaa
you said it friend

give me a kiss eh

never give in

when loss is assured
you may still win

I always advise my kids/and grand

''NO'' IS IN YOUR POCKET

BUT DO ASK

IT MAY BECOME A ''YES''

ELSE HOW WILL IT EVER

IF YOU REMAIN silent quick silver

They smile and say
give a 100 dollars
right away

I can only afford ten
they take it are happy
and run away
then return

Kiss me on my nose
for free ...smilingly

About This Poem

Last Few Words: JUST A SWEET MESSAGE TO MANY BE NOT NEGATIVE

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Geezer

Geezer

2 years 11 months ago

Such a great...

feeling having grandchildren, hey? I'll bet that you are a hell of a grand poppy!
~ Geez.
.

lovedly

lovedly

2 years 11 months ago

THANKS Gee

they four are very very beautiful in looks and heart
they love me so much
my children wonder how and why
I give them LOVE and flying kisses
even in my dreams
and as in pain if ever I do scream

They are my souls
keep me alive
for their love only
I shall forever stay alive

BLESS ALL WILL YE