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lovedly

Jan 29, 2023 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Beautiful Eyes

There's beauty
in each one's eyes
so we see differently

to ensure
we don't dwell

in an indifferent
mundane world

we all are beautiful
humans
animals
birds
and
bees

About This Poem

Last Few Words: All eyes are beautiful

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read , and they inspire..

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Comments

2 years 5 months ago

Bees have compound eyes

I wish that we could be a bee
A fuzzy wuzzy bumblebee
A buzzing bumbling bee we be
A-buzzing 'round a basswood tree

He-hee!

Thomas

2 years 5 months ago

thanks Thomas

u r humorous

2 years 5 months ago

If we had compound eyes

We could see a lot more beauty...may be why bees are attracted by flowers. Now write a poem about flowers and bees.
Please.

Thomas

2 years 5 months ago

Thomas

You can wear double glasses or carry Binoculars you will see better AHA

2 years 4 months ago

When I read

your poetry, it's like looking through a kaleidoscope.
May be like bees see....oui?

Thomas

2 years 4 months ago

nice multi coloured did u mean ur eyes

thanks a tonnnneeeeeeeee

S

2 years 5 months ago

Hi loved

Try it using each one's eyes instead of eye. Even an insect with compound vision has 2 eyes lol

2 years 5 months ago

Thanks Stan and Lav

for he edit I had it in mind ...but perhaps ignored the rhyme
Thanks ... this is what Neo is for
rgds

2 years 5 months ago

Beautiful Eyes

Hello, Lovedly,
I agree with Stan - plural eyes in the second line, especially to go along with your title. So glad to look at the world through your inspiring poem and your "Beautiful Eyes."
Thank you!
Lav

2 years 5 months ago

Lovely

I agree with all the above suggestions.

I think you could've expanded this made your poems world bigger.

I see you've changed that second line.

Well done.

Love and hugs Sis xxx

2 years 5 months ago

yes Seren

I am a Neo follower
Waiting a poem from you

aeons past by

2 years 5 months ago

Read your messages. I sent

Read your messages. I sent you one hrs ago.

Jayne

2 years 5 months ago

Great I shall wait

Let the world know ...an anony once lived
I must also know someone
another poem composed
before i ebbed...
Aussie sis