The Corrupted Evolution

14 years 3 months ago

Bloke

the question is are you asking or do you know.
for me it's yes
"with out the dark we could not call the light day."
Eddie C,

14 years 3 months ago

hi eduardo

Elaborate on are you asking or do you know?

14 years 3 months ago

yes means that I don't believe in this whole soul thing, the bible says, "the soul is the body and the spirit is what return to God", it's kind of hard to believe, So I'll just live this one, and let God worry about the rest, Hahaha!
Tomorrow i'll be struck by lighting. LMAO
I love dark poetry, that was all I use to write up to a year ago, then I fell in love and light came into my mind, Ahh shit to much information. Hahaha!
sorry, I liked this write a lot It expresses how I feel about it.
there's your Elaboration,
thanks For the Great post
Eddie C.

14 years 3 months ago

One hell

of an elaboration if i believed in such a thing. Thanks mate. I also fell in love about 18 months ago and now I don't just write dark poetry, I will share such a poem one day. Too much info?

14 years 3 months ago

Bloke

Eddie is good Eduardo is to formal.
Eddie C.

14 years 3 months ago

Well

Well hello there Eddie. Bloke.

14 years 3 months ago

hello

Back to you!

14 years 3 months ago

ok this 'man love' is

ok this 'man love' is becoming too much! lmao...

14 years 3 months ago

Chez

I like you very funny stuff.
good sense of humor, your cool in my book < if I had a book.
Oh yeah i do have a book, guess what your not in it, to much of a re-write> Hahaha!
EC

14 years 3 months ago

If..

I was in your book Eddie I'd be War and Peace lol...*wink

14 years 3 months ago

OOOh!

bi-polar, now I'm scared.
Hahaha!
Eddie C

14 years 3 months ago

lol on the contrary just long

lol on the contrary just long and complex :P

14 years 3 months ago

Chez

I got it, just having fun with your choice of words, buddy.
I am glad that you have a good sense of humor, wait didn't I say that already.
Here it comes alzheimer. Bullocks.
Eddie C.

14 years 3 months ago

lol Eddie

It's been a delight so far, the poetry, the poets and the fun, enjoying myself here

14 years 3 months ago

Good!!

Here I am working really hard, while your out having fun. Hahaha!
"Fast Eddie Esq."

14 years 3 months ago

Can't stop laughing

I'm glad you both have a sense of humour, wish I could have been part of such a turbulent conversation, yeah i'm still laughing.

14 years 3 months ago

One might say...

do we corrupt only the body and leave the soul for god? For me I think we should use the body and forget the soul as soon as it leaves us, it's not ours. This is dark but the images and the feelings I get when reading this are quite haunting, I don't write quite this dark but I enjoy someone who does it well.

14 years 3 months ago

CC

Your response is what I am hoping a reader of this poem might ponder, thank you. That being said, I do not necessarily believe in the existence of a soul from a religious point of view, my views are elsewhere. Yet I do not deny the possibility.

14 years 3 months ago

No problems

Considering my views on ordered religion which I think is contemptible lol I prefer the work of the philosophers and their different points of view. Have just finished reading The Antichrist by Nietzsche which I found fascinating.