Valentine

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Thank you for sharing your poem titled "Valentine." I appreciate your willingness to receive feedback.

Overall, your poem captures the atmosphere and anticipation of Valentine's Day. The imagery of people preparing and hustling to make it to the evening creates a sense of excitement. The mention of gifts being everlasting and heartwarming adds to the sentimental nature of the occasion.

However, there are a few areas where you could further enhance your poem. Firstly, consider varying the rhythm and meter of your lines to create a more dynamic flow. This can help to engage the reader and add musicality to your poem.

Additionally, you might want to explore more vivid and specific imagery to paint a clearer picture for your readers. For example, instead of using the phrase "voices are mute only soughing," you could describe the sound of whispers or hushed conversations, which would create a more evocative image.

Lastly, the ending of your poem feels abrupt. Consider expanding on the idea of

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Are you a new member? If so, welcome to Neopoet! I much enjoyed your poem. It happens four days before my birthday, lol,

*hugs, Cat