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Apr 09, 2024
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We don't say it
but our bones melt into one
and become the shape of it
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About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Geezer
1 year 2 months ago
Esoteric...
to say the least. I almost get it; but that's okay, I'm sure that it wasn't written just for me. ~ Geezer.
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violet
1 year 2 months ago
Nice to see you round these
Nice to see you round these parts after so long. Thank you and hope you're well in life.
Geezer
1 year 2 months ago
You talk...
like it was me that hadn't posted but three poems in the last ten years! I am most pleased to see and read your work again. I guess I must have missed a bit of it when I was hospitalized with pneumonia. Yeah, I have COPD and on oxygen, but still here. I keep turning up like the proverbial bad penny or a piece of steel, hard to get rid of and attracted to Neo. like by a magnet. I do hope that you will be around more. ~ Geez.
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violet
1 year 2 months ago
Sounds like you've been busy
Sounds like you've been busy ;) Through it all, still here and still writing.... and I'm glad you are.
Has it been ten years! You got me there (I say through a smile)
Obadiah Grey
1 year 2 months ago
Loved this!
Loved this!
its a single malt
with a hint of banana.
Obi.
violet
1 year 2 months ago
Thank you
Love "Sarah" so far. Looking forward to reading from you some more.