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Makeshift night
My girl on her wedding night
A legend bright
A lesson in kites
No irony you flying high with me tonight
Together birds of a feather
Spinning light
Eyes wide and alert
Island turf hate feeling alone
Simon says shirt I told you it hurts
My wife's in my chest
My heart must be her purse
Beatle jerk your juice is magic proof it works
Imagine dude my mind is mad at you
Late up past two
When it breaks and the window shakes
Intruder with a pistol
My humors like a victim it's just great
Sarcastic mistake aladins shade brown
wearing the prince of thieves crown
Obscene howl I love Halloween
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Cool
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
neopoet
8 months ago
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Geezer
8 months ago
I guess...
a celebration is in order? Honeymoon in the shadows?
At any rate, having read your poem, it does not appear to be of an explicit nature,
[at least not here on this site]. ~ Geezer.
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Oppressed smith
8 months ago
Celebration
Yes we're still celebrating it's a great time
Candlewitch
8 months ago
Hello,
welcome to the Neopoet poetry site! may your poetry find a home here. It is very nice to meet you!
regards, Cat/Candlewitch
Oppressed smith
8 months ago
Thank you that's so kind to
Thank you that's so kind to say