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Makeshift night

My girl on her wedding night
A legend bright
A lesson in kites
No irony you flying high with me tonight
Together birds of a feather
Spinning light
Eyes wide and alert
Island turf hate feeling alone
Simon says shirt I told you it hurts
My wife's in my chest
My heart must be her purse
Beatle jerk your juice is magic proof it works
Imagine dude my mind is mad at you
Late up past two
When it breaks and the window shakes
Intruder with a pistol
My humors like a victim it's just great
Sarcastic mistake aladins shade brown
wearing the prince of thieves crown
Obscene howl I love Halloween

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Cool

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Canada, ns

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Geezer

Geezer

8 months ago

I guess...

a celebration is in order? Honeymoon in the shadows?
At any rate, having read your poem, it does not appear to be of an explicit nature,
[at least not here on this site]. ~ Geezer.
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Candlewitch

Candlewitch

8 months ago

Hello,

welcome to the Neopoet poetry site! may your poetry find a home here. It is very nice to meet you!

regards, Cat/Candlewitch