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Dec 08, 2024
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Loss
Heady
Intoxicating
When does hope and renewal
Get to feel this good
Ah,my Mama
I think about
How you will be a story
But you deserve so much more
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
neopoet
7 months ago
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kowque
7 months ago
I've always been your best
I'm vindictive
I like watching you flailing
You think,Im replaceable
Keep
TRYING
Lavender
7 months ago
Loss
Hello, Koki,
Each line filled with a sense of both grief and reverence.
Thank you,
L
kowque
7 months ago
I'm told I write few lines
I was trying to supplement the poem,
But it ended up a comment
But, an edit, is still an edit.
Have I told you that I have Lavender in my garden? We don't have water this side
But, it grows and persists in giving life.
Thank you for stopping by :)