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May 01, 2025
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Coffee
Java
A morning drink
My scent and taste I love
Reminding me to set my goals
Coffee
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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neopoet
1 month 3 weeks ago
Neopoet AI (Premium) - version 3.0
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
Consider expanding imagery and sensory details beyond scent and taste to deepen the reader's experience. The poem currently relies on straightforward statements; adding more nuanced or unexpected descriptions could enhance its emotional resonance. The line "Reminding me to set my goals" introduces an intriguing connection between coffee and motivation—consider elaborating on this idea to clarify or enrich the thematic depth. Additionally, the repetition of "Java" and "Coffee" at the beginning and end could be revisited to ensure each repetition adds meaningful emphasis or variation.
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Lavender
1 month 3 weeks ago
Coffee
Good morning, Clentin,
A sensory cinquain! I might change "the" to "my" in the second line to give even more personal love for the drink.
Thank you!
L
Clentin
1 month 3 weeks ago
Thank you. I agree with you-
Thank you. I agree with you- thanks!