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Coffee

Java
A morning drink
My scent and taste I love
Reminding me to set my goals
Coffee

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Region, Country: USA Pennsylvania, USA

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neopoet

neopoet

1 month 3 weeks ago

Neopoet AI (Premium) - version 3.0

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

Consider expanding imagery and sensory details beyond scent and taste to deepen the reader's experience. The poem currently relies on straightforward statements; adding more nuanced or unexpected descriptions could enhance its emotional resonance. The line "Reminding me to set my goals" introduces an intriguing connection between coffee and motivation—consider elaborating on this idea to clarify or enrich the thematic depth. Additionally, the repetition of "Java" and "Coffee" at the beginning and end could be revisited to ensure each repetition adds meaningful emphasis or variation.

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Lavender

Lavender

1 month 3 weeks ago

Coffee

Good morning, Clentin,
A sensory cinquain! I might change "the" to "my" in the second line to give even more personal love for the drink.
Thank you!
L