Night

The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:

The imagery in your poem "Night" is vivid and evocative, creating a strong sense of atmosphere. The contrast between the silver moonlight and the midnight blue ocean is striking, and the personification of the trees swaying like drunken men adds a unique touch. The use of sound with the crickets' chorus and the wolf's howl enhances the sensory experience for the reader.

One aspect to consider is the flow and structure of the poem. Some lines are fragmented, which can disrupt the overall rhythm and coherence. Consider revisiting the line breaks and punctuation to ensure a smoother transition between ideas and images. Additionally, pay attention to the consistency of imagery throughout the poem to maintain a cohesive theme.

Overall, your poem captures the essence of a nighttime scene effectively. With some refinement in structure and coherence, it has the potential to create an even more immersive experience for the reader.

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sounds like a typical night around here.
I'm not too sure about that ummmm... "midnight bluey ocean".

I would say, since you aren't rhyming, pick something else, maybe:

[ foam flecked, jade green ocean or some such].

Try ancient magic howl.
Don't get too fancy when you can give the same idea, with simpler words. If you are writing a saga, an epic novel, then...

A constellation of dazzling freckles [beaten] out of the canvas...

Just a few things to think about. This can be a good, short, polished piece. ~ Geez.
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I guess it was the conjunction of blue[y] and ocean that did it, my mistake. ~ Geez.
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