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Jul 06, 2025
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_____ meets terrence and shares her art with me
________ _____ ______
you're sitting in my car!
you're very very cool,
and we haven't driven very far...
do you happen to like
my fuzzy pink dice?
are you enjoying this?
has your time here been nice?
is this little poem
worthy of yours?
and if it is not,
i will beg on the floor.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: this is a silly little thing that i wrote in preparation for a first date with a poet. it went really well, i'll never see her again, i'll read franny and zooey for her, i am in love with being nineteen
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Geezer
2 months 3 weeks ago
Hmmm...
You say that the date went well, but you don't think you will ever see her again? Nineteen is a very good time to be alive; you are on the cusp of becoming an adult, while still remembering the joys of childhood. Keep writing, I am intrigued, wondering what comes next. ~ Geezer.
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