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Sep 15, 2025
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School Days
I remember Sister Marie Claire
I feel the chill through my spine and the hair
I remember the ruler hitting my head
When I approached the board with dread
Math was a subject I wanted to go away
Hoping that it would be over each and every day
She was a woman with a mission in mind
Also a lady who would often be unkind
Those days are just a memory now
As a teacher myself I now know how
Kindness keeps kids wanting to stay
Willing to learn more each day
Not afraid to ask when they do not know
Seeking help from a person with a bright glow
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Early school remembered
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
1 week 4 days ago
This is a true lesson for…
This is a true lesson for every teacher. Kindness/humanity is absolutely a must trait in teachers who want to raise a generation. It's not about learning and teaching subjects, but also raising a Man .
If I may suggest, the opening lines.feel a bit awkward for me
I suggest something like
Everytime I remember Sister Marie Claire
I feel the chill through my spine and the hair.
Jut for a tighter rhythm
Thank you for sharing
Clentin
1 week 4 days ago
Thank you for suggestion. I…
Thank you for suggestion. I agree! Thanks
Clentin
1 week 4 days ago
Thank you for suggestion. I…
Thank you for suggestion. I agree! Thanks
Clentin
1 week 4 days ago
Thank you for suggestion. I…
Thank you for suggestion. I agree! Thanks
Clentin
1 week 4 days ago
Thank you for suggestion. I…
Thank you for suggestion. I agree! Thanks
Clentin
1 week 4 days ago
Thank you for suggestion. I…
Thank you for suggestion. I agree! Thanks
Geezer
1 week 3 days ago
Clentin Is your...
button stuck? I suggest that your piece could use a little bit of a trim in some lines.
Clentin
1 week 3 days ago
I find the site very slow…
I find the site very slow and I think maybe I should hit again!